I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms. Komor.
Hi kiko it me mounga befor you publish your writing please proof read it maybe like 2 times and maybe you should put them in pargrghs.I like the way you added more sentence to your writing
hay Kiko I think you soled add some more detayel
Hi kiko it me mounga befor you publish your writing please proof read it maybe like 2 times and maybe you should put them in pargrghs.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added more sentence to your writing
hay Kiko I think you soled add some more detayel
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