I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms. Komor.
Hey Kiko I like that you write about your holiday. I herd that you had a new car in your holiday. And I like the way you did a captle letter. But I thek you soled worked hared on your writing. Good one Kiko.
I think you have to add some more details:)
Hey Kiko I like that you write about your holiday. I herd that you had a new car in your holiday. And I like the way you did a captle letter. But I thek you soled worked hared on your writing. Good one Kiko.
ReplyDeleteI think you have to add some more details:)
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